Fic: Eternal Night
Oct. 31st, 2011 11:25 pmA/N: This scene was an experiment of sorts,an attempt to capture an intense scene through the voice of a completely dispassionate observer/narrator. Thanks to ArcadianMaggie for prereading and TwilightMundi for betaing.
Oh. And Happy Halloween. *shivers*
Eternal night
Moonlight spills across the forest floor.
Silence fills the deep green-black wilderness of Mt. Rainier.
The two vampires move soundlessly through the underbrush, unnoticed. Nor does the wildlife open their eyes to catch a fleeting glimpse of pale luminescent flesh.
Still and quiet, the forest sleeps.
Two within will never wake; by the time the deer's senses alert her to danger, she's too late. With merciful speed and precision, the vampire is on her, ending her. Drinking her.
Her mate falls likewise, as the vampire's companion sups at the buck's throat.
Blood, slick and hot, warms the throats of the cold ones. Heats their bodies. Encourages the smoldering animal within.
One vampire raises golden eyes to peer at the other feasting alongside him. He releases his prey long enough to utter a name, low and hungry, steeped in bloodlust.
The other looks up.
Locking eyes, the two vampires appear frozen as the carcasses in their arms continue to spill blood onto the earth below.
The stillness is shattered when one of the vampires drops the deer and takes the other vampire to the ground in a flash of limbs and teeth and needy lips.
Hissing, he bites and sucks along the neck of the other, leaving trails of venom and blood along the pale flesh.
The other vampire pulls him to his chest, clawing at his back, arching off the ground in desperate want.
They tangle and move against each other, gasping and crying out through stained lips, their raw desire painting intimate designs in spilled blood along their shoulders, torsos, thighs.
Drawing a finger through a deep red pool, one of the vampires draws it to the other's mouth. Moaning, he suckles, biting slightly as it is withdrawn and replaced by a tongue thickly coated in sustenance.
The vampires move to feed from each other. Mouths and teeth scrape along eager blood-slicked hardness, eliciting breathless noises of furious desire as what is given is received.
Pulling away, one turns, moving fluidly, and bends, presses against the other. They join, coated in blood and lust and instinct. The vampire grasps at the other, pulling him close as he bucks against him.
He breathes the name, again, into the dark night air.
"Edward."
It carries through the forest, accompanied only by the grunts and hisses emerging from the mouth of the other until he erupts between them with a shuddering groan.
The vampire pauses to lap at the thick sticky release now coating the other's belly, but soon begins to move again, an animalistic growl emerging from his throat as he ruts against the body of the other. He is raw and brutal in his thrusting, the other clinging and grasping at his hardened flesh.
Moonlight filters through the canopy overhead. Rays of white light indiscriminately illuminate branches and rocks, ferns and death, and the cold, taut musculature of the vampires coupling against the earth.
The stars continue along their steady paths as a second cry of completion echoes through the sleeping forest.
The pair rest, pale and unmoving, lying against the mossy ground, the fallen deer at their sides.
It is silent once more.
Oh. And Happy Halloween. *shivers*
Eternal night
Moonlight spills across the forest floor.
Silence fills the deep green-black wilderness of Mt. Rainier.
The two vampires move soundlessly through the underbrush, unnoticed. Nor does the wildlife open their eyes to catch a fleeting glimpse of pale luminescent flesh.
Still and quiet, the forest sleeps.
Two within will never wake; by the time the deer's senses alert her to danger, she's too late. With merciful speed and precision, the vampire is on her, ending her. Drinking her.
Her mate falls likewise, as the vampire's companion sups at the buck's throat.
Blood, slick and hot, warms the throats of the cold ones. Heats their bodies. Encourages the smoldering animal within.
One vampire raises golden eyes to peer at the other feasting alongside him. He releases his prey long enough to utter a name, low and hungry, steeped in bloodlust.
The other looks up.
Locking eyes, the two vampires appear frozen as the carcasses in their arms continue to spill blood onto the earth below.
The stillness is shattered when one of the vampires drops the deer and takes the other vampire to the ground in a flash of limbs and teeth and needy lips.
Hissing, he bites and sucks along the neck of the other, leaving trails of venom and blood along the pale flesh.
The other vampire pulls him to his chest, clawing at his back, arching off the ground in desperate want.
They tangle and move against each other, gasping and crying out through stained lips, their raw desire painting intimate designs in spilled blood along their shoulders, torsos, thighs.
Drawing a finger through a deep red pool, one of the vampires draws it to the other's mouth. Moaning, he suckles, biting slightly as it is withdrawn and replaced by a tongue thickly coated in sustenance.
The vampires move to feed from each other. Mouths and teeth scrape along eager blood-slicked hardness, eliciting breathless noises of furious desire as what is given is received.
Pulling away, one turns, moving fluidly, and bends, presses against the other. They join, coated in blood and lust and instinct. The vampire grasps at the other, pulling him close as he bucks against him.
He breathes the name, again, into the dark night air.
"Edward."
It carries through the forest, accompanied only by the grunts and hisses emerging from the mouth of the other until he erupts between them with a shuddering groan.
The vampire pauses to lap at the thick sticky release now coating the other's belly, but soon begins to move again, an animalistic growl emerging from his throat as he ruts against the body of the other. He is raw and brutal in his thrusting, the other clinging and grasping at his hardened flesh.
Moonlight filters through the canopy overhead. Rays of white light indiscriminately illuminate branches and rocks, ferns and death, and the cold, taut musculature of the vampires coupling against the earth.
The stars continue along their steady paths as a second cry of completion echoes through the sleeping forest.
The pair rest, pale and unmoving, lying against the mossy ground, the fallen deer at their sides.
It is silent once more.